I snapped some pretty good fall pictures today, but I don't want to be stuck in a rut for a while, so I decided to try a couple of machine pictures. I have seen some great machine pictures and these aren't those pictures. I think the subjects could be interesting if I can figure out how to get some emotion into them.
This one is almost there, the feeling of antiquity. I think the right lighting might make this one work.
I am not sure what to do with this one... the long shadows are ok, but maybe too bright? This one could be forlorn or something. I think I wanted to feel "ghost town" or at least hibernation in this shot. (For the curious this thing works great, I just parked it here the day before and it is an invaluable garden shovel for building flower beds.)
OK, while this thing makes a great wheelbarrow and I enjoy using it in my gardening projects, I really need to work on composition and lighting to make this interesting. This proud old machine, born in Seattle while I was learning my basic cypherin' in grade school, still stands ready to serve. I sense potential here, but need to noodle on how to put some feel into this:
Tried a dash shot like the old Chrysler one above... you really have to stretch to build interest in this. Rod Stewart insists that "Every Picture Tells a Story" and since I love that song, I have to agree. This one just requires too much of the viewer. The story I see when I sit behind the wheel of this fine old machine, is of all the hands of the people that came before me, nursing the truck through a days work, all the miles it has traveled, and the wonders it helped build. I will think on how to reframe this shot because I would like to tell this truck's story.
All in all my foray into machine shots today is a bit disappointing and very exciting at the same time. Disappointing in that they really are not compelling, yet exciting in that I learned by taking them and studying them what I really wanted the shots to do. Now comes the creative part of figuring out how to do that.
ok...my unprofessional comments. on the dump truck, out side, do small shots, head light with part of the grill, grill with radiator cap and part of the windshield, windshield wiper and side mirror...it sure is a cool truck!
ReplyDeletelove the first dash picture. like the idea about the second dash again divided up different angles etc...don't know what to say about your shovel...think you are right darken it a bit...can you change the angle and get a bit of a glimpse inside the bucket too...don't know what that would look like....
nice pictures brother! :)